Saskia Halman  - Peer Feedback

Strengths: The layout shows continuity and is clear to read. The colour scheme matches your magazine style throughout and the images link to your genre well. I love the features you've included as it shows a look into the magazine itself without giving too much away.

Improvements: Could put some of the text in boxes to make it separate from the background and make it stand out more. Maybe add a upcoming festival feature/competition.