Contents Page

Front Cover

Double Page Spread drafts

These are my three double page spread drafts.  They all fit in with the layout of my front cover and contents page.  The colours of my products are the same three to create synergy.

My Response

In response to my peer and teacher feedback, I will make changes to my contents page in accordance to what they suggested.  I will put boxes around my text to make it stand out as well as putting a box around my second image to make it look effective.   I will also try to change some of the colours around.       

Teacher Feedback

Saskia Halman  - Peer Feedback

Strengths: The layout shows continuity and is clear to read. The colour scheme matches your magazine style throughout and the images link to your genre well. I love the features you've included as it shows a look into the magazine itself without giving too much away.

Improvements: Could put some of the text in boxes to make it separate from the background and make it stand out more. Maybe add a upcoming festival feature/competition.

Leah Darvell- Peer fedback on contnts page
Your contents page follows the typical conventions and the layout is very clear and fits with your chosen music genre. You have used the 3 colour rule using black, white and red which follows the conventions and looks professional. I love the detailed band index as I think it adds the finishing touch to your contents page.

To improve you could play around with you chosen colour scheme by maybe switching the red and the white around, as having a coloured background would add more emphasis to the page. Another thing that would add to your contents Page if you out a boarder around your other image like the top image as it looks really effective.